Script Annotation
no scores. no percentiles. no bullshit.
This isn’t coverage - it’s a line-by-line read of your screenplay: character, structure, style, page craft.
Actionable notes, annotated to the eighth.
Scripts are annotated in Acrobat Pro - grab Adobe’s free Acrobat Reader for the best view.
The Edit Button colour coding:
Story
Character,
Tone,Voice,
Themes…
General
Questions, Issues,Logic, Grammar…
Production
Budget,Scope,
Casting,VFX…
Tune Up
Clunky phrasing or parlance…
Offers
Suggestions,
Punch Ups…
Cuts
Recommended
cutting,
Redundant
words…
Screenplays
The Devil’s Gift (WT) - Thriller - CURRENTLY in first draft (CONTRACT)
Kāpiti - Disaster - CURRENTLY in first draft (SPEC)
The Tenth Planet: The Red Sister - Sci-Fi - Completed
2027 directed by Matthew Philip Cannon, starring Kevin Spacey
Inuksuk Peak - Survival - (SPEC)
Canadian International Film Festival - Finalist
Pro Tip - Comedy - Short (SPEC)